Selasa, 24 November 2009

Advantages and Disadvantages of consume Junk food

Advantages :
  1. delicious
  2. easily presented
  3. not bothered
  4. cheap
  5. easy to get anywhere
Disadvantages :
  1. unhealthy
  2. containing preservative
  3. causes cholesterol, heart disease and obesity
  4. not nutritious
  5. cause cancer

Senin, 16 November 2009

Exercise 3

Topic Sentence :
I went to the airport to service out of town with his company.but, to the airport. any delay plane.

Supporting ideas:
I went to the airport for a vacation with family out of town. but, until the airport we had to wait for a delayed plane. so we had to wait for several hours. because of bad weather that hit the city. to get a ticket or passport should be saving our family for this great holiday. while also raising money for our walk with family.

Minggu, 15 November 2009

Living My Parent

if I lived with my parents.
there are few advantages and disadvantages as follows:
advantages:
  1. costs adequate
  2. needs available
  3. if I get sick, there are mothers who care
  4. get the full affection of both parents.
Disadvantages :
  1. not free
  2. always forbidden to do something
  3. disagreements occurred
  4. frequently asked
this my true story.....
so.....
I was happy living with both parents under one roof or house.
because, whatever the benefits or disadvantages ...
does not make one that made me turn to stay with my parents.

thank you mother and father ...
who has guided me like now ...
U luph fuuLLL ....!!!

The Characteristic My Family

My name is eri kurniawan ..
everyone called me eri...
I was born in Jakarta on 12 June 1989...
I live with my parents in Lenteng Agung, South Jakarta...
My hobbies are playing soccer and futsal because i have idol is Eric Cantona. he is a Manchester united's greatest footballer...
while playing football, I used the position as the playmaker waistband...
my current job as a student at the University Gunadarma...
I have aspirations, wants to be a graphic design major companies...
My family has 2 children. I have 1 brother and myself was the first child
And My Brother is Dika Erlangga...
He is School SMIP Jakarta...
and he's just like me like to play Foot Ball...
Sometimes we are often at loggerheads when playing ball. so that makes us not chided each other greetings.
we were together in a football team since the argument . we exchanged greetings again.
rarely know the father and mother when we were bertengkar.karena, they are very busy with their work.
but, we both still be brothers and sisters who are always close to each other. to maintain the brotherhood that we do now.

Minggu, 01 November 2009

Exercise 1

Topic : Airpots

Controlling Idea : The Problem of
The Topic Sentence : every person prohibited from carrying firearms and sharp objects into airports.
* Outline Supporting Idea :
  • Expensive to buy a Passport
  • Often Delay Schedule
  • Weather Bad
  • And Often be Lost Signal
* How To Construct The Outline into paragraph ?
I went to the airport for a vacation with family out of town. but, until the airport we had to wait for a delayed plane. so we had to wait for several hours. because of bad weather that hit the city. to get a ticket or passport should be saving our family for this great holiday. while also raising money for our walk with family.

Selasa, 29 September 2009


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